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“ Doing the world on yourself includes educating yourself on social justice issues.” —> Doing the WORK on yourself includes educating yourself on social justice issues.

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“ If the organization is engaged in systems that contribute to systemic pedophilia, this” —> unexpected EOL

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Many people before defensive or fragile —> Many people BECOME defensive or fragile

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I should hire you to proofread my next book.

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“While someone might personally be kind to children if they participate” —> While someone might personally be kind to children, if they participate

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I can't believe you wasted your time on this. What a loser you are.

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